The Silent Aviator

lol, thanks.

Very good! At first, It actually sounded like a war poem until I read the last lines. I liked that. Well written.

Hello, Josh.Welcome to YWS. Hope you enjoy it. Nope, not a warcraft player.

Ha. Funny:9/10

Then I would be the one doing the attacking!

Hello, scifiguy, and welcome to the YWS... You can call me Silent, Aviator, or simply TSA. All work. I kinda like sci-fi...I'm working on a sci-fi story now that I ...

lol. No, unfortunatley, I think the Parris Island DI's would do the ass-whoopin'. :)

Thank you for the advice. I've corrected a few of the mistakes. I'll tackle the rest when I have more time on my hands. By separating the text, do you ...

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Aviator, The Alien's are attacking because o' this jemstone which is important for some reason...... Thank you for clarifying. FYI, my dad was in the Army...of course he's nothing like ...

Wow...well written.

Very good, Ladyequine! :) I don't know enough about poetic structure or grammar to post a proper crit, but I know enough to realize that this is an awesome poem.

Hello, welcome to the YWS... You'll like it here... Call me Aviator or TSA.

Phoenix- Awesome avatar; YWS king of Halo 2.

Obviously its suggestive, but content aside, it's pretty good.